Exploration+and+Colonization+of+America's+Corrections

Here are my comments and suggestions. Read them carefully and improve your work.

1. The Conquistadors
 * Title: delete the second title and the main title on the table of content, the title of your page already appears at the top of your page. Done.
 * Table of content: it is correctly located but it does not cotain useful or important information. It should include the main titles of your topic. It is not interesting or useful because it does not show interesting information.
 * Appearance: your page seems boring and not interesting as it contains little information. It should also include some images and videos. Your main page has improved a lot. Give consistance to the rest of the pages so that they look alike.
 * Content: your main page should contain lots of information about how the exploration and colonization of America was organized. Then you can create other pages to extend important information but your main page is the first thing a user is going to see so it should contain interesting information and look attractive. On the other hand you are only working on exploration and conquer but you have to research also about how America was colonized.
 * The page Who were the conquistadors? contains useful information but you should research a little bit more about the characteristics and the agreements the conquistadors made to be able to go to America to discover and conquer new lands. Remember that the kings of Spain were the ones that allowed them to go there. Research about the contracts or Capitulaciones.
 * The page Hernan Cortes is also interesting but it looks boring, reorganize the information in a more interesting and clear way. Research for adventures or strange things that hapened during the conquest.
 * The page Cabeza de Vaca is also interesting but it looks boring, reorganize the information in a more interesting and clear way. Research for adventures or strange things that hapened during the conquest.
 * The page Francisco Pizarro is also interesting but it looks boring, reorganize the information in a more interesting and clear way. Research for adventures or strange things that hapened during the conquest.
 * The page Francisco Orellana is also interesting but it looks boring, reorganize the information in a more interesting and clear way. Research for adventures or strange things that hapened during the conquest.
 * Content: complete the information by following the instructions I gave you on the class. Do it before the end of the week please.
 * Original Content: some of the information has been copied, you have to use your own words. Keep on creating original content.
 * Grammar: review the tenses and the spelling. Keep on working on grammar, tenses and spelling.
 * Other observations: you have done a good work but you need to improve your main page and obtain more information about the topic. You also have to give some information about how America was colonized.
 * 2nd correction's observations: you have done good work and you are close to finish the research. Introduce the changes I have told you on the class and send me a message. After that you can begin using tools to create materials.
 * Tools: Use the tools to create the following materials:
 * Maps by using google maps in which you show explorations and conquest done by the different conquistadors. At least one by conquistador.
 * One presentation by using moviemaker of each conquistador.
 * One glog by using Glogster in which you explain your topic's information and insert the movimaker presentations created for each conquistador.
 * Optional: Vokis and Xtranormal movies about your topic or the conquistadors.
 * ¡Good work, make the changes so that it gets perfect!