Portuguese+Exploration's+Corrections

Here are my comments and suggestions. Read them carefully and improve your work.

1. Portuguese Explorations:
 * Title: delete the second title, the title of your page already appears at the top. Done
 * Table of contents: it is correctly located but it does not contain useful information probably because your main page contains little information. Improve the table as you improve your content. It is still not useful because it does not focus on the main issues.
 * Appearance: your main page does not contain useful or important information and it looks boring as it does not have images or videos. You have improved the main appearance so it looks more interesting.
 * Content: your main page should give general information about Portuguese Explorations, why did they explore, what was the objective, who supported the expeditions, how were expeditions organized, who formed the crew, what route did they follow, what did they find, what were its consequences, etc.
 * The page about reasons should not be a differente page. This information should appear on the main page and it has to explain what was the kingdom of Portugal and where was it located, Then you have to explain the reasons giving more information so that they are perfectly clear for anybody that may visit your page. Use hypertext to redirect people to other pages that may expand information.
 * The page about Bartolomeu Diaz contains interesting information but not much information about the expedition itself. You have to research more about the trip (who organized it, the money used for the expedition, the crew, the route, the lands they discovered, portulanos or logs that were created...) On the othe hand the image that says "Bartolomeu Diaz's return to Lisbon" is wrong, it is Christopher Columbus arriving at America. Very good. Now you've got interesting information about this issue. Some more hypertext to clarify the information is needed.
 * The page Vasco da Gama contains interesting information but not much information about the expedition itself. You have to research more about the trip (who organized it, the money used for the expedition, the crew, the route, the lands they discovered, portulanos or logs that were created...) Very good. Now you've got interesting information about this issue. Some more hypertext to clarify the information is needed.
 * The page "Difficulties" contains information that should be included at the beginning of your main page because it is connected to the reasons that led to explorations. It is nice to include information abotu the Treaty of Alcazobas but not about the treaty of Tordesillas because another group is working on that topic. The information about "Difficulties" should be at the top of the page. The information related to the "first years of exploration" on the North of Africa makes more sense on your main page, move it there. Move there also the information about the Treaty of Alcaçovas and try to find more information about it. Include some hypertext to clarify the information.
 * The page about Henry the navigator is interesting but I am sure you are able to obtain more information about him. Look in portuguese pages. Use hypertext to clafiry the information.
 * Content: You need to give a general explanation about your topic and then direct people to your different pages to know more about the topic. Improve your main page because the rest of the pages are interesting and contain enough useful information. Organize better the information on your main page so that it is logical and make sense...for example the information about Henry the navigator should appear before than the information about Vasco da Gama...the reasons should appear after the information about the Crown of Portugal...
 * Original Content: use your own words, do not copy. I know that you are not copying but I just wanted you to keep that idea in mind.
 * Grammar: review tenses and spelling. This is quite good but don't forget to keep on this good work.
 * You have done good work but it is spread throught different pages while your main page is desserted. Improve your main page please. At the same time you need to research more to obtain more information and details.
 * 2nd correction's observation: You have improved your work a lot and you are almost ready to begin with tools. Please make the corrections I suggest, specially on your main page and use more hypertext when needed.
 * ¡Good work but need some more research!
 * Tools: these are the materials you have to create by using different tools:
 * Maps by using Google Maps in which you show the explorations (at least one for Vasco da Gama and one for Bartolomeu Díaz)
 * Presentations by using Moviemaker: one for Henry the Navigator, one for Vasco da Gama's expedition and one for Bartolomeu Diaz's expeditions.
 * One glog by using glogster including the most important information about your topic and inserting the previous moviemaker presentations.
 * Optional: Vokis and/or Xtranormal movies.