Government+of+America's+Corrections

Here are my comments and suggestions so that you can improve your work. Read them carefully and introduce changes in your pages:

1. Laws of the Indies

 * Title: delete the second title, it already appears at the top of your page. Done.
 * Table of Contents: it is correctly located and quite useful but you should rethink the parts again. It is still not useful because it does not show interesting information.
 * Appearance: your page seems borign, it doesn't contain enough information and there is a lack of images
 * Content: the content is not enough. You need to explain what the Laws of the Indies where, how many laws where created and in which dates, what their purpose was, who created them, if they were useful...Then you have to link each set of laws and summarize the main articles, explaining in English what do they mean and why are they interesting and useful and if they help us understand better what the situation in the Indies was. You have add little information after my first correction and it is not clear or useful. It is obvious that you don't understand what you're talking about and that you don't know much about the Laws of the Indies.
 * Original Content: you have to use your own words, it is compulsory. You have improved this issue, don't forget to keep on doing it.
 * Grammar: be careful with tenses and spelling. It is better but you still have to check grammar, tenses and spelling.
 * Other observations: I know this is not an easy topic but I am sure that you can do an extraordinary work on it. Divide and organize the work among the members of the group.
 * 2nd correction's observations: Little change has been made on your page. The information is not useful as it does not talk about the laws and what did they contain. You are running out of time. If you don't improve your work and take it seriously you may fail this trimester.
 * ¡Focus on your topic, research about the different set of laws and explain them!

2. Consejo de Indias

 * Title: delete the second title, it already appears at the top of your page. Done
 * Table of Contents: it is correctly located but not interesting as this page does not contain information at all. Use the table of contents only for useful and important parts of your topic. You have to create different titles that seem more interesting.
 * Appearance: your main page looks boring as it doesn't contain useful information. You should also embed images or videos. The main page has not been improved so it still looks boring and not interesting.
 * Content: the main page has to contain general information about how America was governed and a summary of el Consejo de Indias and La Casa de Contratación. Then you can use the other pages to expand the information.
 * The page Consejo de Indias needs to be organize in a different way. First, what was the Consejo, why it was created, what for, who were its members, who created it, did it govern, how did it work, which decisions did it take, how were these decissions sent to America... You have added new information so your content has improved, but you have to investigate even more about the Consejo. I don't understand why you are talking about Gabriel de Guemes, it does not make sense. Keep on investigating and researching for useful information.
 * Original Content:you have to use your own words it is compulsory. It is better but there are some paragraphs that are not yours and that you don't understand, change them.
 * Grammar: be careful with grammar and spelling. Keep on working on grammar, tenses and spelling.
 * Other observations: you did some good research but you can improve it.
 * 2nd correction's observations: Some changes had been made but it seems that you still don't really know what the Council of the Indies was and what were its duties and functions. You need to improve your work, research more. You are running out of time, you need to do it immediately or your marks of the 3rd trimester may be in danger.
 * ¡Make your main page look more interesting and complete the information on the secondary page!

3. Casa de Contratación

 * Title:it is correct
 * Table of Contents: it should be located at the top. Some headings are not correct.
 * Appearance: quite good
 * Content:
 * The page Casa de Contratación needs to be organize in a different way. First, what was it, where was it located and why there, why it was created, what for, who were its members, who created it, did it govern, how did it work, which decisions did it take, how were these decissions sent to America... It has been improved and it is quite good. Anyway, you need to explain more what the functions of the Casa de Contratación were.
 * Original Content:you have to use your own words it is compulsory. The vocabulary is better but don't forget to use your own words.
 * Grammar: be careful with grammar and spelling.
 * Other observations: you did some good research but you can improve it.
 * 2nd correction's observations: The page has improved enough. Make the changes that I am suggesting and inform me. I also want to know if Luis Miguel is working on the project and what is he doing exactly.
 * ¡Make your main page look more interesting and complete the information on the secondary page!